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TIPS FOR GIVING GOOD FEEDBACK
Honor the Work. Remember that each story or novel was written with great care. Be respectful. Make sure you ask people who will honor your work and understand the responsibility that comes with providing feedback.
Start with something positive. What are the strengths of the manuscript? Well-developed character? Wonderful description on p. 3? Turn of phrase on p. 35? Great opening line? Great ending line for a chapter? Let the writer know what is working so s/he can learn from that.
Provide helpful feedback. Saying "I don't like this" or "This doesn't make sense," is not helpful unless you say WHY. You could say something like, "I love the way you show how upset she is here. I think it could be stronger by..." or "You have a wonderful voice with this character, but we aren't sure what the story is about yet."
Point out where you were affected. What made you laugh? Choke up? Smile? Feel fear or anxiety? These are places where the writer is doing his or her job, pulling the reader in emotionally. If you were bored or pulled out of the story at some point, explain that as well. These are places that need to be stengthened or removed to keep the story moving.
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