I’m big on re-visioning and always make the point in the classes I teach that revision isn’t just changing a word here or there or moving a paragraph. It’s re-visioning your story, seeing it from a different angle, reshaping it into something new.
I’d written a picture book years ago called Superhombre. It won the Lee & Low Honor Award in 2001 which came with a nice check but no promise of publication. I worked with a wonderful editor there over the next two years to see if we could get it to a place where she could offer a contract. Finally, after many revisions and rewrites, we agreed to disagree. We just had different visions for the story.
Over the years I’ve pulled it out, gotten feedback, rewritten it, then put it away. At one of our RMC-SCBWI summer retreats I had an author read it and provide feedback. She really liked it but felt there was much more story to tell. “It should be a novel,” she said. I had no interest in expanding it into a novel–I had lots of novel ideas I wanted to write–so it sat a little longer.
Fast forward to 2012 (11 years later!). Editors are saying shorter is better, humor is good so I tackled Superhombre again–now with a girl main character and a different title. I tightened it, added more humor, and tried to decide what to do with it. I included it with four other picture book manuscripts that I sent to my new agent.
She really loved it and felt it worked as a picture book, but had I ever considered expanding it to a chapter book? She could see it as a series with this fun main character.
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I’d actually considered a series–but as picture books. I’d even written a book that came before the current book. But now…a chapter book. What did I think? A chapter book was a lot different than novel–easier in some ways (shorter and more straightforward in plot), but harder in others (I needed to watch vocabulary and sentence structure a bit). But I was open to this idea, then excited by it as I started to imagine how it might work. I pulled out the other picture book manuscript, remembering how hard I’d struggled to get everything in that I wanted to in 800 words or less. Now I had several thousand words I could use!
After working on my novel yesterday, I began outlining the first book. I think I actually may have something.
I’m so grateful to my agent for suggesting it and grateful to myself for being a manuscript pack rat–I have every version of every story on my computer and can pull from different ones to develop a whole new book!
Do you have a story that might work better in another form? Even if it’s a form you’ve never considered, consider it. You just never know. I’ll keep you posted on what happens with this.
Thanks for the great tip; I have Little Lopsided Smile that will fit better as a chapter book than picture book.
You’ll need to report back on your progress! I will do the same. There’s a teeny part of me that’s wondering if I can keep the momentum after outlining the first 4-5 chapters (basically a line that says what happens in that chapter.) And of course, I’m reading a bunch of chapter books too and picking them apart!
You have further processed fermentation of the idea for my Little Lopsided Smile to become a chapter book rather than a picture book. ALso, thank you for encouraging the re-thinking. My teacher son has encouraged me to re-write LLSmile from another point of view, just to see?????? I am called jaq or q; for simplification, I will go by q.
Hey Jaq! I can see LLS in a different format – it will be fun to play with it, eh? I’m so happy my post sparked something for you! I find that once I get over my initial reluctance, my mind is free to actually approach the story in a new way and ideas just start flowing.
Denise, you sound like me. I have sooooo much trouble whittling a story down to a manageable picture book length. I had one story I had intended as a PB get away from me and end up about 1600 words. I knew that wouldn’t work, so I turned it into a short chapter book. I think the format works better that way. There are some manuscripts that just have to be picture books, but others say, “Hey, have ya ever thought about writing me as a chapter book?”
It’s so nice to know I’m not the only one! I was so determined that it should be a picture book that I wasn’t willing to consider alternatives. That’s so cool that you turned yours into a short chapter book and you’re right – I think I need to listen more carefully to what my stories are telling me :-).